HI Everyone

HI

My friend wana write a circular for the company to announce a new training course. I would like you to chek with me the circular that she have written , I found that it need to be changed little bit , but wanted to take the ideas from all of you girls

This is the circular , pleas check

In an effort to cope up with the technology latest innovations and inorder to help our employees to enhance there performance and skills in an easiest way. The training section would like to announce the intention to the E-learning program to all …. employees.

E-learning software, also called Electronic learning software, enables you to deliver courses and instructions electronically via the internet, a company intranet or other platformsuch as CD-Rom or DVD.

The benefit of the e-learning will help the ….. employees t develop themselves, contact easily with the instructor , self assesment, the cost and travel are reduced

e-learning includes: on**** learning, on**** education, distance learning, distance education, web based training, video/cd

In an effort to cope up with the technology latest innovations and inorder to help our employees to enhance there performance and skills in an easiest way. The training section would like to announce the intention to the E-learning program to all …. employees.

the word there should be their

technology latest innovations
this is a strange kind of description

The benefit of the e-learning will help the ….. employees t develop themselves, contact easily with the instructor , self

The aim of introducing e-learning is to encourage self-learning environment, communicate effectively with instructor, reduce training and traveling cost and the ability to asses yourselves

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